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Beauty is the sole legitimate province of the poem.-Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is when emotion has found its thought and thought has found words--Robert Frost

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance--Carl Sandburg

I have nothing to say, I am saying it, and that is poetry--John Cage

You will find poetry nowhere unless you bring some of it with you--Joseph Joubert

Poetry is what in a poem makes you laugh, cry, prickle, be silent, makes your toe nails twinkle, makes you want to do this or that or nothing, makes you know that you are alone in the unknown world, that your bliss and suffering is forever shared and forever all your own. ~Dylan Thomas

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The Purple Thistle Requiem


This early morning as Kellie and I walked at the Fulton County fairgrounds and Salem city park, we happened upon a purple thistle bush with two blooms. I have blogged before about my confused and contradictory feelings about this beautiful but obstinately stubborn invasive weed. It can destroy hayfields, which are very important to local farmers and the local economy. I myself spent many days out on Carroll Hicklin's farm in the hot summer sun both spraying and digging up these thorny, flashy flowers. I don't miss those days, and I am glad that the purple thistles that Kellie took these pictures of are not in my yard, and, hopefully, will never be a problem for me. (The picture at the bottom is one that I posted last year.)

Anyway, the pictures reminded me that I had made a promise to my blog readers at some point that I would find all the versions of The Purple Thistle that I have written. Sadly, I think that at least three of those versions must be hand written because I can only find the original version, published in The Purple and Blue Collection, a fragment version that I never did anything with until today, and the #5 version, which will be published in Atheists and Empty Spaces. I have put them all together here for you below the second of Kellie's pictures from this morning. Enjoy!



Purple Thistles


The Purple Thistle

(First version I can find)


In the rusty breath of dusty summer twilight,

The purple thistle spreads frosty leaves

To the glistering twists of faltering light

And yields not to the sleepy peace

of the sordid moon.


Bowing pregnantly in this heavy sigh,

Lespedeza and Fescue acknowledge royalty

And vainly supply the ground with grain

(Whiskers tickle the lazy cow's chin.)

While bending slender torsos to the music

Of a holy war.


Black-eyed Susan bumps Queen Anne's lace

And the industrious mouse chews at the bitterness

Of the skunk flavored chokeweed, yellow

And green in its courageous cowardice.

A fat black grasshopper leaps and is stabbed

In the beak of a whispering barnswallow.


The thistle quivers with anticipation

As myths of a savior whip through dream's stages,

Decked in purple, crowned with thorns

Radiant in the depths of divine sacrifice.

(A lone man approaches with a yellow tank on his back.)

The faith is unwavering in tricky

Early moonlight.


Cattails reflect in the shimmering smoothness

Of the violet sky in the frog-infested pond.

The purple thistle is without a mirror image

And lives on what it sees in dreams.

(But the man thinks he knows what he sees.)

Decked in purple, crowned with thorns,

Radiant in the depths of divine sacrifice,

And confident in its lack of disease,

The thistle stands still in the dusty breeze.


In the black hose, poison mist whistles

And fogs the thistle from a blunt brass nozzle.

The grass whithers in fairy circles.

Tomorrow's sun will toast frosty thorns

And the Savior's myth will not be reborn.


The grass waves in golden brown rows

And tender shoots green the nose of grazing cows.

The wind draws circles as though to nestle

In this fertile field without one thistle

And no more will it purr and whistle

Across frosty thorns and purple crowns

In the rusty breath

Of the dusty summer twilight.


The Purple Thistle

(A fragment that was #2 or #3)


In summer twilight’s golden dust,

The purple thistles proudly thrust

Their faces at the final faltering light.

Without a sigh, a moan, or peep,

They droop into a dream-filled sleep.


Each thistle shakes in breezeless air,

Decked in purple, crowned in thorns,

Dreaming dreams messiahs dare

As though the myth itself adorns

The worthless weed with faithful flair.


A man who knows naught of delusion

Approaches the dreamers without confusion,

And from his black tank, a poison mist whistles

Coating and killing the myth-dreaming thistles

In the sleeping peace of a common illusion.


The green fades to brown in the sun-drenched field

Made free of the blight of the purple thistle.

The wind draws circles as if to nestle

Beneath the moon’s broad beaming shield

In the soft warmth of quivering grass.


The Purple Thistle

(Old #5)


In the rustling breath of harvest twilight,

The purple thistle spreads its frosty leaves,

Grasping wisps of eastern silver sky light

And evanescent nips of Autumn eves

Yet does not yield to peaceful sleep too soon

In the soothing aura of mother moon.


Held fast in fertile soil with heavy sigh,

Tall grasses wag their lush seeds in the wind

Strewing for migrant birds a food supply

And tickling drowsy cows upon the chin

While twisting supple torsos to a tune

Pronounced in silence by the rising moon.


Black-eyed Susan blooms bump Queen Anne’s fine lace

Smearing sinless white licentious yellow.

A green grasshopper springs in empty space;

A sleek barn swallow stabs the poor fellow

And skitters to his nest with scratch-legged boon,

His sickle shadow on the bald-faced moon.


The thistle whispers in its zealous sleep

A savior’s myth that whips through fervent dreams.

Bedecked in thorns and swathed in purple deep,

The thistle knows no suffering nor seems,

Its faith a tricky hieroglyph or rune

Translated by old lovers of the moon.


Now, both horizons blush a wounded red,

But neither orb bobs in a brightening sky.

The sleepy thistle rises from the dead

Or from a dream in which it cannot die.

The moon is gone; the sun razes the gray.

A farmer with a spray tank walks that way.


Assured it has no rot or leaf disease,

The flower flaunts its health and beams with pride.

The man believes it’s just a weed he sees

And cures the nuisance with an herbicide.

From a brass nozzle, poison mists whistle

Crusting and killing the guiltless thistle.


Slender tan grasses bend in passive bows.

Tired winds weave lazy circles to nestle

Near the bristly noses of blissful cows

In a reformed field without one thistle.

They murmur and warble as if to croon

But sing no excuse to the chary moon.



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I find that I cannot exist without Poetry--without eternal poetry--half the day will not do--the whole of it--I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan.-John Keats

We do not quite say that the new is more valuable because it fits in; but its fitting in is a test of its value.-T. S. Eliot

A man may praise and praise, but no one recollects but that which pleases.-George Gordon, Lord Byron

The great beauty of poetry is that it makes everything in every place interesting.-John Keats

Our faulty elder poets sacrificed the passion and passionate flow of poetry to the subtleties of intellect and to the stars of wit; the moderns to the glare and glitter of a perpetual, yet broken and heterogeneous imagery, or rather to an amphibious something, made up, half of image, and half of abstract meaning. The one sacrificed the heart to the head; the other both heart and head to point and drapery.-S. T. Coleridge

The purpose of rhythm, it has always seemed to me, is to prolong the moment of contemplation, the moment when we are both asleep and awake, which is the one moment of creation.-W. B. Yeats

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