Prickly green gumballs! If you think it is hard to get a picture of one crow sitting anywhere, try getting three of them to sit still for the time it takes to touch a circle on your cellphone. Nearly every day on our walks at the fairgrounds/city park, Kellie, Luna, and I encounter three crows that I have named the Crow Brothers. They are ever present, and they were "a messing' around" this morning as Luna and I walked in the bracing wind, but I never could get even one of them in a picture. So, I hunted up this picture that I took last summer. Of course, it is only one of them, but I think that you can see the shadows of the other two mixed in with the shadows of the tree limbs.
Anyhow, I have named them the Crow Brothers though they could be sisters or brothers and sisters or a love triangle. Who knows? I didn't get a picture this morning, but when I saw them, I thought that I needed to write a poem about them. For some reason or another, I could only hear a poem about the crows in my head told in the voice of an old mountain woman. You know the kind I'm thinking about, stringy long hair, big crooked nose, corn cob pipe in her toothless mouth. No! No! I am kidding. In my mind, I hear some mash up of Mrs. Bertha Strayer, Mrs. Retha Hastings, and Mrs. Araloise Wilson, three gentle ladies from around Sunnyland, AR that I loved to listen to--and they sure did love to talk and to feed a feller if he would eat.
Anyhow, I have never been a fan of attempting to display local dialect in literature--even with as great a writer as Mark Twain--, but this is the way I heard the poem in my head. Let me know what you think. As always, ENJOY!
Three Crow Brothers
Theys allus three crow brothers
A messin’ on Fern hill
Theys a flittin’ and a dippin’
But theys never standin’ still—
Twos a scratchin’, ones a watchin’
With a piercin’ evil eye,
Till a hackin’ and a cawin’,
They explode into the sky.
A hecklin’ and a jawin,’
They cut shines all through the blue.
I allus wondered who theys funnin’ at.
I think it must be you.
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