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Beauty is the sole legitimate province of the poem.-Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is when emotion has found its thought and thought has found words--Robert Frost

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance--Carl Sandburg

I have nothing to say, I am saying it, and that is poetry--John Cage

You will find poetry nowhere unless you bring some of it with you--Joseph Joubert

Poetry is what in a poem makes you laugh, cry, prickle, be silent, makes your toe nails twinkle, makes you want to do this or that or nothing, makes you know that you are alone in the unknown world, that your bliss and suffering is forever shared and forever all your own. ~Dylan Thomas

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Two Versions of One Psalm and Thank You, Again



Ladies and gentlemen, my friends, family, and folks, thank you so much for making my book Atheists and Empty Spaces, the #1 new bestseller in Inspirational and Religious Poetry off-and-on for two days running. It has fallen pretty considerably today, somewhere around #100. I did not mention that it rose as high as #77 in the General Poetry category. That may not seem too awesome, but for a day or so, it was two spots behind Milton's Paradise Lost and five spots behind Maya Angelou's Selected Poems. That is not bad company to be in--and it is all because you are willing to support me. Thank you.

Today's picture is one that Kellie took of an amazing white flower that we found on a daily jaunt around the Fulton County fairgrounds. There was only one of these flowers in any field, and we had never seen one like it before--ever as far as I can remember. Two days later, Luna (our dog) and I were walking, and the field was full of them. Anybody know what they are?

Anyway, today's two poems as one poetic offering are explorations of unique relationships with what I will call a "higher power." One is from is from a human point-of-view, and one is from a flower's point of view. The two meld together to suggest that even though thoughts, ideas, and beliefs may be slightly different, they do not matter when the end is the same. As I have been doing with this entire set of poems, these are very musically oriented, and, if I could play music, I would set them to music. Maybe, somebody with talent could do that for me.


As always, I want to hear from you. I want to know what you think. Email me, comment in Facebook, or contact me through the blog. Most of all, ENJOY!


Two Versions of One Psalm


A Psalm Filled with Doubt

(To Be Set to Music)


I do not think he made my heart

A tender budding shoot

That withers before winter’s start

And shivers in its root.

I have a doubt he spent one hour

Focusing his ample power

On the blooms of one plain flower

When he made billions more.


I do not think he mows me down

Nor bends my fragile stem

With righteous anger, wind, or storm.

What is my pain to him?

Why would he stoop to serve me wrath

Or place sharp prickles in my path

When he wipes clean in one blest bath

The mortal dust I wore?


I’ve heard the burbling of a fool

Who equals him with luck,

But he is neither kind nor cruel,

Lightning withheld nor struck.

He is not fate nor circumstance;

He does not fill my life with chance

Though in his eye, I’m just a glance,

And then, I am no more.


A Psalm Filled with Faith

(To Be Set to Music)


I love the way she made my heart

A tender budding shoot

That gathers deep at winter’s start

And pulses in its root.

Then, when the sun is out an hour,

She focuses my blooming power

And I create one tiny flower

While she stirs billions more.


I love the way she holds me down

And keeps my fragile stem

Safe from the angry wind and storm.

What have I done to them?

What did I do to rouse their wrath?

I wish I’d never cross their path

Except I need a soaking bath

To wet the bloom I bore.


I heard a climbing, vining fool

Call our dear Mother “Luck,”

But she is always kind not cruel,

A blow withheld not struck.

She wields my fate, not circumstance;

She does not leave my life to chance

Though in her eyes, I’m just a glance,

And then, I am no more.



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I find that I cannot exist without Poetry--without eternal poetry--half the day will not do--the whole of it--I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan.-John Keats

We do not quite say that the new is more valuable because it fits in; but its fitting in is a test of its value.-T. S. Eliot

A man may praise and praise, but no one recollects but that which pleases.-George Gordon, Lord Byron

The great beauty of poetry is that it makes everything in every place interesting.-John Keats

Our faulty elder poets sacrificed the passion and passionate flow of poetry to the subtleties of intellect and to the stars of wit; the moderns to the glare and glitter of a perpetual, yet broken and heterogeneous imagery, or rather to an amphibious something, made up, half of image, and half of abstract meaning. The one sacrificed the heart to the head; the other both heart and head to point and drapery.-S. T. Coleridge

The purpose of rhythm, it has always seemed to me, is to prolong the moment of contemplation, the moment when we are both asleep and awake, which is the one moment of creation.-W. B. Yeats

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