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Beauty is the sole legitimate province of the poem.-Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is when emotion has found its thought and thought has found words--Robert Frost

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance--Carl Sandburg

I have nothing to say, I am saying it, and that is poetry--John Cage

You will find poetry nowhere unless you bring some of it with you--Joseph Joubert

Poetry is what in a poem makes you laugh, cry, prickle, be silent, makes your toe nails twinkle, makes you want to do this or that or nothing, makes you know that you are alone in the unknown world, that your bliss and suffering is forever shared and forever all your own. ~Dylan Thomas

Shadows and Early Iris Blooms: Getting Ahead of the Past Year

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Not an Early Iris Bloom
Not an Early Iris Bloom

Well, my friends, I didn't have a picture of my shadow or an early iris bloom, so an iris bloom from March 31 of last year will have to do.


As hinted in today's title, I am moving right along with my revisions, and I have revised and edited into the Poems-a-Week from March of last year. In fact, the two poems below both show an origination date of March 31. The next three poems on the flashdrive show a date of April 14. We will have to see if I can get all three revised by next week. Cross your fingers. And with your fingers crossed, please ENJOY the following revised poems that have been placed in the NO NAME BOOK.


I am still waiting to here from someone with a name for me. Um...not for me, but for the Poem-a-Week book.


Me and My Shadow

 

He’s as tall as a tree in the morning

But dissipates in sunlight like the moon.

Early in the day, he marks my warning

But he’s barely a kitten’s mewl by noon.

 

I’ve thought he plays a part like an echo.

But in reflecting my notions, he slips.

The details of my person he cannot show,

So he’s literally my own eclipse.

 

Although his ties to me are never tender,

I’d wager he will always be most true.

My image, he’ll believably render

Though it won’t seem an equal “me” to you.

 

In summertime, he flutters in the heat.

When we are cold, he may fog with my breath.

In bright daylight, we fasten at our feet,

But darkness parts us to his nightly death.

 

No one will ever give my shadow kisses,

But he will never feel sadness or sorrow.

Ignorant of the loving touch he misses,

All he desires is a sunny tomorrow.


An Early Iris Bloom

 

The stretching stem pierces the mulching leaves.

It tries to reach the sun and cannot fail.

Its small bloom begs for kisses from the clouds,

And drizzle falls on beardlets thin and pale.

Today, the northern wind is brisk and cold.

Too bad! The iris bloom has sprung too fast.

I cut the bud and press it in a book.

Kept there, it may not grow, but it will last.

Someday, perhaps in years, I may recall

The sprout that lived and died without a scream

And find the pages where its odors fail

And think its life was nothing but a dream.


I am also revising Aunt Charlotte's Crib in bits and spurts. I will warn you folks that I am making significant revisions to the serialized story that is still published here on the blog in the Dewey Lynn Stories tab. You can still read about Aunt Charlotte there, but the story will be different. We will have to wait and see how much.


Please think about getting a copy of Uncle Boog and the Dogfight. I have had a few more rave reviews given to me personally by readers. We need to convert those personal reviews into some online reviews--and maybe I could put some on the book cover. I don't know if I can change the cover at this point. I think I will find out.


Uncle Boog Cover
Uncle Boog Cover

Until next week...

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I find that I cannot exist without Poetry--without eternal poetry--half the day will not do--the whole of it--I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan.-John Keats

We do not quite say that the new is more valuable because it fits in; but its fitting in is a test of its value.-T. S. Eliot

A man may praise and praise, but no one recollects but that which pleases.-George Gordon, Lord Byron

The great beauty of poetry is that it makes everything in every place interesting.-John Keats

Our faulty elder poets sacrificed the passion and passionate flow of poetry to the subtleties of intellect and to the stars of wit; the moderns to the glare and glitter of a perpetual, yet broken and heterogeneous imagery, or rather to an amphibious something, made up, half of image, and half of abstract meaning. The one sacrificed the heart to the head; the other both heart and head to point and drapery.-S. T. Coleridge

The purpose of rhythm, it has always seemed to me, is to prolong the moment of contemplation, the moment when we are both asleep and awake, which is the one moment of creation.-W. B. Yeats

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