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Beauty is the sole legitimate province of the poem.-Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is when emotion has found its thought and thought has found words--Robert Frost

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance--Carl Sandburg

I have nothing to say, I am saying it, and that is poetry--John Cage

You will find poetry nowhere unless you bring some of it with you--Joseph Joubert

Poetry is what in a poem makes you laugh, cry, prickle, be silent, makes your toe nails twinkle, makes you want to do this or that or nothing, makes you know that you are alone in the unknown world, that your bliss and suffering is forever shared and forever all your own. ~Dylan Thomas

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Remembering a Friend: A Really Old Poem and Some Well-made Knives


Though we will never know the exact day, thirty-five years ago somewhere around this time of the year, my good friend Glenn Aron Hicklin went into the woods behind the family's hayfield barn and took his own life. He was 22 years old--about a month from his 23rd birthday. In the couple of years before his untimely death, he was very interested in becoming a knife maker. Like most of the things that he did, he went into knife making full bore. I do not know how many knives he made in the two or three year period that he worked at it, and I definitely do not know if he ever sold any. However, I do know that he often made mistakes in making a knife, and whenever he did make a mistake, he would give the knife to me.


In 1988 and 1989, Glenn gave me at least eight or nine knives, which he called his "mistakes." As far as I know, I still have all of them. I just don't know where all of them are. I found the three knives above that I placed in the shadow box three years ago in a cedar chest in my shop. The bottom of the chest had fallen out. The knive's handles were loose. The handle on the Bowie knife at the top was broken, and the metal on all of the knives were rusty and almost black from being dull. My friend and former student Zechariah Holmes is a great blacksmith, and one day, I saw him and asked him if he could restore and refurbish the knives for me. He looked at them and said he would be proud to do so. Yesterday, I finally put the restored and refurbished knives in a shadow box under glass after 35 years. Now, everyone can admire the works of my friend's hands that have not toiled on this Earth for 35 years. Glenn is gone, but not forgotten.


In honor of this day and the dedication of the knives, I would like to revisit a poem that I wrote so long ago three days after Glenn's funeral. I had not revised the poem since I wrote it. To me, it was untouchable. However, since the Glenn's knives can be restored and refurbished, I thought, "Why not restore and refurbish the poem too?" So I did. Here it is. At the end of my poem is a song that Glenn wrote. It was written in 1986 and stuck in a my song and poem notebook from those days though I have no memory of him putting it in the notebook. ENJOY! Please let me know what you think of the poem and song and let me know if you have any memories of Glenn.

Funeral for a Friend

Part I.

Here on the strong and nestled hill

Where eternal winds blow,

But now are still,

I, within myself,

Am quaking in my soul

And acting with no will.

 

Part II.

No hush flows through the knitting pines,

No mirth fills the walnut's brevity,

No crackle ticks the oak tree’s tines,

No prickly gumball's break and fall,

No willow's tendrils wave and whine,

But silence spreads across them all.

 

Part III.

Leaden feet carry me to the door

Where I once called out to my friend

And never once was I before

So unwilling to cross that door

Or to hail the folks that sat within.

 

Part IV.

I must change now, for memory is strong,

And it seems I am part of someone’s bad dream.

A woman sits there who does not belong,

Her lips aquiver with a repressed scream.

The couch, where we for many years,

Watched Johnny Carson and Saturday Night Live,

Was covered black like convoluted biers.

Legs moved in dozy numbness lie a beehive

Dosed with drowsy smoke by its master.

I saw my reflection in the painting of praying hands.

I saw my shadow crawling on cracked plaster.

The clock, no longer counting time's tumbling sands

Had submitted to the wish of Joshua's hands.

I was a piece in this, yet not one of the parts.

Men joked about the prospects of a savior

Women suffered the hardness of their hearts,

Yet all knew they displayed proper behavior.

Without a doubt, everyone acted with good sense

While whirling in my mind with gods and demons.

I'm glad I’ve written these things in past tense.

I know no right or wrong within their reasons.

Their voices chopped in fan blades that cooled flushes

Of errant notions and bodies to hold.

Tickled hands drew from embarrassed brushes

For in embrace the thoughts were not so bold.

 

Part V.

 His mother grabbed my hand and cried

And pulled me strongly to her breast.

For something we had shared had died,

But even now I must confess

That I had never called her mother,

Not one time in my life,

But it was well to call her Other

Since she is now Our Father's wife.

 

Part VI. 

She collapsed within my arms with a dread I’d never felt.

Her cheeks warmed the collar of my shirt.

I could feel her heartbeat as we knelt

And prayed for Death to ease away this hurt.

The limestone of the fireplace blushed red,

A log lay in the dog-irons cold and black,

Her hands, clenching on my bare neck, bled,

The blood ran unimpaired all down my back.

She asked me for some peace with pleading eyes

And I, with a true heart, choked up and lied,

"When one of us passes, only a part of us dies"

But she did not believe, and later on she died.

 

Part VII.

I swear that those who die in us live on

And run and fight and love and procreate.

We throw angry threats at burdensome fate

Until, at last, we are done.

We are time, and we are timeless, and we wait.

We are all a part, and we are all one.

 

Part VIII.

The floor was bowed with weight and dust.

Empty hands gave emptier food, and hollow minds took bites.

Shallow souls gave sound advice that seemed so right and just,

But held no grace in hardened hearts as diamonds do with lights.

There was no more game, no more play, the dirt was on the grave,

The flowers were sent, and the passions were spent.

Time to collect the cold crockery and wave.

The proper behavior didn't even make a dent.

 

Part IX.

Now, I alone with just the two

Had no notion what I should do

Standing paralyzed with fear

As if I felt that God was near,

But I have heard no Holy Tongue

Nor song with angel’s voices sung.

I could not speak or make a sound

To bring the walls of heaven 'round.

For here was deep and dark despair

Which by no means could I repair.

I felt so near the gates of Hell,

That dumb was right and just as well.

Thus, with our reflection done,

There we stood all as one

With silent stares and sodden hearts

Feeling the loss of many parts.

 

Part X.

Here the bad dream ends, and new life begins

In long walks through scattered leaves and rocks.

Here we dwell in our passions and sins,

In our self-prisons of memory’s' locks.

I am the same, though tempered by time,

But several of the rest are gone,

But I remember through communal rhyme

While all the others went their ways alone.

I remain to give each day its glory,

To praise each setting of the ageless sun,

To hear birds sing, and then to tell the story

Of how the parts are still alive in one.

 

Part XI.

It was a sunny day, though no one knows,

When he decided life must end

And he believed, as the old saying goes,

That he had no future and no friend.

The evening light shined through dusky trees,

The birds and squirrels startled at his feet,

He said no prayer on his bended knees

But listened to his own broken heart's beat.

He smoked a joint and silently gave praise

To marijuana's gift of easing pain,

Then he put the loaded pistol to his face

And aimed the dark cold barrel at his brain.

The cracking of the pistol made deer start,

But they went back to caring for their young.

His faithful dog who followed would not part

And licked away the small blood with his tongue.

And there he lay all quiet in the wood

More peaceful than the act that he had done.

He sliced away the part he thought no good

And left no pieces here to soothe the one.

 

Part XII.

Some say that he was a father,

Some say that he was a child,

From what I know and what I gather,

His mind was a little too wild.

We cannot take nature and make a man,

No animal surprises us with reason,

No human law breaks the natural ban,

So we live in the throes of the season.

And his wasn’t summer or spring,

His wasn’t a bright Harvest moon.

He grew weary of this cyclical thing

And brought Winter on too soon.

We often play gods with Nature's parts

And regret the great harm that we've done,

But we seldom realize in our prideful hearts

That we cannot replace parts with the One.

 

Part XIII.

For his memory, I will now let him sing a song that he wrote in June of 1986 and stuffed into my notebook of songs and poems.

 

The stage is now yours Glenn Aron Hicklin 1966-1989.

 

Silence, Light, and Sound

 

When it all comes down from all around,

There is never enough silence, light, or sound.

It's always there never gone,

Always there never found

Sometimes I wonder where we are bound.

 

Coming fast and furious,

Dying slowly, steadily, surely, now.

Has it been here before or never again?

Experience it now, it's not a sin.

Noone knows where it has been.

Survived somehow it did, so right it is;

No doubt

Never enough silence, light, or sound.

 

Flowing over, under, around, beside,

It's will strikes constant, steady, strong,

In and between the right and wrong.

One way in no way out

Without a doubt.

No one here; we're all there then

With one way in not wanting out.

 

Begin anew four seasons to a year

Or one thought in time

All the time, never a rhyme,

To fall behind and hide.

So to what it is silence, light, or sound,

Sometimes I wonder where we are bound.

 

 

 

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I find that I cannot exist without Poetry--without eternal poetry--half the day will not do--the whole of it--I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan.-John Keats

We do not quite say that the new is more valuable because it fits in; but its fitting in is a test of its value.-T. S. Eliot

A man may praise and praise, but no one recollects but that which pleases.-George Gordon, Lord Byron

The great beauty of poetry is that it makes everything in every place interesting.-John Keats

Our faulty elder poets sacrificed the passion and passionate flow of poetry to the subtleties of intellect and to the stars of wit; the moderns to the glare and glitter of a perpetual, yet broken and heterogeneous imagery, or rather to an amphibious something, made up, half of image, and half of abstract meaning. The one sacrificed the heart to the head; the other both heart and head to point and drapery.-S. T. Coleridge

The purpose of rhythm, it has always seemed to me, is to prolong the moment of contemplation, the moment when we are both asleep and awake, which is the one moment of creation.-W. B. Yeats

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