Indifference and Lily: Two Poems of Social Commentary
- joybragi84
- 19 minutes ago
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Well, well, well. I trust that you are probably sick of hearing it because you don't feel the weight of it, but the revisions of Atheists and Empty Spaces are coming to an end for this round pretty quickly.--You know, I have continuously that poems are never finished, so I will revise these same poems again. Of that, I am sure.--I counted and I have nine poems left. Two of those are really long poems, but I am almost ready to publish. I hope that I can get my friend Patrick Gillespie to write a foreword for me. He may not want to do it. Who knows?
Anyway, neither of these poems needs an introduction or explanation except to say that the first is inspired by a poem by Matthew Arnold called The Buried Life and the second was inspired by a news article that I read some 10-15 years ago. It seems very prophetic of me looking back at the original. That's all I've got to say. As always, ENJOY!
Indifference
(With deference to Matthew Arnold)
We grow more cozy year by year
In the comforts of modern life.
Deep passion is a thing we fear,
The zealous root of all our strife.
We make our peace with tepid love,
For we have nothing left to prove.
We eat our mush that has no taste,
Relieved that it’s not spiced.
A novel bite is such a waste
When we prefer our white bread sliced.
White bread, white mush, and table salt,
These things we love! It’s not our fault!
We’re trained to think outside a box,
To wrap our minds around a square.
What use is truth or paradox
When even faith is empty air?
And we can quickly heat shit up
As fast as we can eat it up?
Alas, a cynical soul of wit,
A greater sense of irony,
Is valued near the same as spit
But slightly more than poetry.
For us, it’s displayed on TV
And slyly masked as comedy.
True to its form, no subject bores
Or holds our interest for less time
Than all of our incessant wars
And the political sublime.
By “sublime,” I mean “religion,”
A matter far too dull to mention.
Duller still are our feeble laws
And dimmer still the enforcers,
For what was once probable cause
Is now inducement for lawyers
Who become judges of our peers
And stick blind justice in arrears.
But you and I, are we content
To let the people live like fools?
Is this the style in which we meant
To squander our cerebral tools?
And could we set the world aright?
Well…most likely not--but we might.
Lily
Lily loves a painted garden,
No pollen for her nose.
She knows an image, like a name,
Can smell of any rose.
Lily wants a world of love,
But none that she can feel
And lovers who fill all her needs
With nothing that is real.
Lily lives a comfy life
Ensconced upon a wall,
Embowered in both joy and peace
With no pain near at all.
But Lily is a bully
Of people she’s never seen
Because she is a mindless girl
Behind a lifeless screen.




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