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Early Purple Irises
“Is it May? Is it May?”
My early irises say.
Their yellow beardlets blown
White by icy breezes.
“My eager purple sheep
Lay your heads back down to sleep
Or learn a lesson how
Cruel April teases.”
“Is it May? Is it May?”
My drowsy irises say,
Their blossoms cradled in
Soft beams of mellow sun.
“Listen here, my purple sheep.
Lay your heads back down to sleep
And hold your blossoms till
We’re sure Jack Frost is done.”
“Is it May? Is it May?”
The worried irises say,
While I am cozy warm
And sheltered in my bed.
“Oh, dear, my simple sheep
It appears that during my sleep
Jack Frost came by and chopped
Off every purple head.”
Soooo...this poem popped into my head as Luna and I walked today. I had a mind to keep it singy-songy, but then, when I thought of what really happens in the poem, especially at the end, I thought, "Let's make it seem metrical, but then alternate the lines between light and easy rhythms and heavy, dull thudders." That kind of rhythm tends to be aggravating to most people when they try and read it, especially aloud as poems should be read. I don't know about you, but I do get really aggravated when my blooming flowers are nipped in the buds by Ol' Jack Frost, literally. Let's cross our fingers and hope Mr. Frost has gone back north and leaves the huge crop of purple irises I have alone.
As always ENJOY! --And write and let me know what you think about the poems, pictures, or anything else.
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