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Beauty is the sole legitimate province of the poem.-Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is when emotion has found its thought and thought has found words--Robert Frost

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance--Carl Sandburg

I have nothing to say, I am saying it, and that is poetry--John Cage

You will find poetry nowhere unless you bring some of it with you--Joseph Joubert

Poetry is what in a poem makes you laugh, cry, prickle, be silent, makes your toe nails twinkle, makes you want to do this or that or nothing, makes you know that you are alone in the unknown world, that your bliss and suffering is forever shared and forever all your own. ~Dylan Thomas

Another Batch of Poems from the Steaming Pot of A Walk with Words: Book Revisions Half Done!

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First Flower in the Yard 2025
First Flower in the Yard 2025

Well, I am beginning to be able to see the end of revisions on the A Walk with Words book. I think that I am halfway finished. I still have all of the Three Crow Brothers yet to do. That is not a small number of verses, but they are short.


Should I give my advice? No! You folks already know to let each poem stew in its own juices before moving on to the next one. ENJOY!


Don't forget to take a close look at the first jonquil to bloom in the yard in the picture above.


Oh! Also, sorry about the bad formatting below. Copying and pasting does not keep the formatting here the same as in the original document. I had to remove the superscript notations. You get the notes. You simply do not know what the notes belong with.

A Brainless Bloom

 

 I gaze into the night sky like a mirror,

A swirling chaos to ill-formed for error

And see myself an antonym of Love.

The cosmos is not heaven.

It’s just a vacuum even,

So full of space, it has no room to move.

 

 Tell me!

 

Where in this shapeless void is left

A hiding place inside a cleft

Where one can watch as holiness walks by?

I ask this with a hypocritic smile

Because I know the answer all the while.

All those who see a god are bound to die.

 

We’ve numbered all the black holes and the lights,

We’ve named at least a million satellites,

And now, we’ve but to tremble and obey.

We cringe beneath a tyrant’s gaze

Who breaks our souls and checks our days

But barely drives a brainless bloom to sway.

 

  

 

Sol Says

 

I slip over snow-capped mountains,

Sparkle in their icy fountains,

And fall into their valleys with a shine.

Each crack of dawn, I send my rays

To clothe the world in patterned days

Where every celebrant of life is mine.

 

It’s what I do and what I know

That causes stems and flowers to grow

And some creatures to ponder time and love.

I fill the land, the sea, the air.

I’m always here or over there.

I am all that earthly beings can dream of.

 

But to galaxies we pass,

I am a lonely ball of gas,

Dragging along some particles of dust.

They believe in Fermi’s curse,

A silent, lifeless universe,

So they go whirling off because they must.

 

       

 

3. Fermi’s “paradox” states that the lack of evidence of extraterrestrial life is incompatible with the extreme likelihood that such life should exist. I am mocking that claim somewhat—or am I supporting its contradiction?

 

 

 A Weird but Very Short Dream

 

I pass into a world of dreams

Like mists flow over mountains

And slither in half-lighted crags

As shadows creep through fountains.

 

Fear crowds through where worries shine.

I lose faith in my worth.

I have no doubt that they are mine,

These doubts I’ve given birth.

   

The faces dim, the places twist,

The things I see I think I know,

Or dreams form them in altered shapes

That out of the familiar grow.

 

I see a lion and a dove.

The cat prowls in the air.

He’s after something I dreamed of.

I hope it isn’t there.

 

I’m furious or full of love.

I’ve quite a lot to share.

But I’m not sure what I dreamed of.

The bird cries havoc everywhere.

 

  

 

Not Much Good Advice

 

Our actions seem hollow

With no dream to follow.

Our follies echo with laughter.

 

Our lives are abysses

With so many misses

We don’t even know what we’re after.

 

We refuse the curse

Of a cold universe

That is deaf to the signals we’re sending.

 

Our world’s made of stones

That soaks up our bones

And erases our trace in their blending.

       

So, what’s my advice

Against this loaded dice?

I’m sorry, but I don’t have much.

 

Fill your being with peace,

Let your knowledge increase,

And savor a true lover’s touch.

  

A Nursery Rhyme of Thinking and Drinking

 

I lay my poems in a column.

I hardly make one that is solemn.

The sun’s the only thing I forge of fire.

 

I find fervor wrapped in blossoms,

But I never write of ‘possums

Nor skunks though I am feeling the desire.

 

No doubt, my notions stink

Of some smelly stuff, I think,

But I’ve enough of black and white for all.

 

I feel sunshine from above,

I smell bierocks stuffed with love,

And in my item bag, a Master ball.

 

Now, I am just a little drunk.

My goal of crafting verse is sunk

Because my words are poured from brackish cups.

 

Here’s one taste of alcohol,

A tiny tumbler shot for all,

But I’ll imbibe with anyone who sups.

 

 

4. A stuffed roll that all German folks should know about!

5. For all you Pokemon Go fans out there!

The Dog Star Song

 

This July, we reap the dog star’s madness,

Powder settled over summer’s badness

And in dry heat and crinkled leaves confined. 

Do you recall the pure delight

Of April’s slanting, fertile light

That planted thoughts of motion in the mind?  

 

From my air-conditioned room, I will not wander.

The jagged paths of locusts, I’ll not ponder.

Where sunbeams weigh like timbers, I’ll not be.

In this early August frame

That seems warped inside a flame,

I simply will ignore its melody

And hope the dog star ends its song to me.

 

 

6. The Dog Days of Summer generally last from July 3 to August 11 when Sirius, the dog star, is the brightest in the sky and rises with the sun.

 

Comments


I find that I cannot exist without Poetry--without eternal poetry--half the day will not do--the whole of it--I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan.-John Keats

We do not quite say that the new is more valuable because it fits in; but its fitting in is a test of its value.-T. S. Eliot

A man may praise and praise, but no one recollects but that which pleases.-George Gordon, Lord Byron

The great beauty of poetry is that it makes everything in every place interesting.-John Keats

Our faulty elder poets sacrificed the passion and passionate flow of poetry to the subtleties of intellect and to the stars of wit; the moderns to the glare and glitter of a perpetual, yet broken and heterogeneous imagery, or rather to an amphibious something, made up, half of image, and half of abstract meaning. The one sacrificed the heart to the head; the other both heart and head to point and drapery.-S. T. Coleridge

The purpose of rhythm, it has always seemed to me, is to prolong the moment of contemplation, the moment when we are both asleep and awake, which is the one moment of creation.-W. B. Yeats

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