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Beauty is the sole legitimate province of the poem.-Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is when emotion has found its thought and thought has found words--Robert Frost

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance--Carl Sandburg

I have nothing to say, I am saying it, and that is poetry--John Cage

You will find poetry nowhere unless you bring some of it with you--Joseph Joubert

Poetry is what in a poem makes you laugh, cry, prickle, be silent, makes your toe nails twinkle, makes you want to do this or that or nothing, makes you know that you are alone in the unknown world, that your bliss and suffering is forever shared and forever all your own. ~Dylan Thomas

Ah! Weeks and Months of Wonderful Revision

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The Park Stream in the Snow
The Park Stream in the Snow

As you can probably guess, with revisions and editing of the Poem-a-Week poems going on, I will not be writing much new stuff. I think that it is neat to look back and see what I wrote a year ago--until I get bored with it. Then, it is not so fun. The first poem from last year, posted somewhere around February 1st, was a nod to William Butler Yeats attitude toward the general reader of poetry. He felt, like T. S. Eliot would later on, that the average person trying to read poetry often dismissed it as the arcane broodings of druids and witches because the average person does not see the poetry in her life and thinks that it comes from some mysterious place. I tend to agree that people don't "get" poetry much anymore, but for very different reasons than either of those two gentlemen.


I believe that modern average readers, who consume pop novels and other prose by the volumes, have been led to believe that poetry is difficult and obscure through their associations with nearly a hundred years of very bad poetry. Thus, they have sought poetry in other forms rather than the forms that have been foist upon them by terrible high school teachers of literature and even worse college instructors, who truly believe that they are the gatekeepers of the arcane and unknowable, like pop music and the lyrics of songwriters like The Beatles and Taylor Swift. If you have been forced to read much of Walt Whitman or any of the 20th century free verse American poets, you know what I mean. You might have said, "I just don't get this. Is this really poetry?" Well, don't worry! It was not worth getting if you have to say that. Are all of our 20th and 21st century poets bad? No! But we have so much access to the bad stuff that it is hard to sort through all the crap to get to the good stuff.


Thus, you find my agreement with Yeats. Good poetry does seem magical because it is so hard to find. However, if you keep looking for it in the wrong place, you will end like the "fool" that I write about in the poem below.


If you go back and look at this poem a year ago, you will see that I have not changed much of it. I started to alter the meter to a strictly iambic meter through changing some words and numbers of syllables, but then I thought, "No, let's just go with the sound." Read this poem aloud and see if you can hear the rhythm created by the words. ENJOY!


Unpopular Notions of Poetry

(In agreement with Yeats)

 

A fool, within his empty mind,

Finds learning a mystery

And feels that simple truth and facts

Are complex conspiracy.

 

He also thinks that nothing’s real

Except what prophets see,

But who’s a seer and who’s a liar

Is based on his degree.

 

The dolt is stumped by the arcane

But swears it’s what he believes

While he and obscure ritual

Remain as thick as thieves.

 

And last, he likens poetry

To altering spells of a witch,

While poets themselves always maintain

They can’t change the dumb son-of-a-bitch.



The Fishing Pier at the Pond
The Fishing Pier at the Pond

Later, folks!

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I find that I cannot exist without Poetry--without eternal poetry--half the day will not do--the whole of it--I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan.-John Keats

We do not quite say that the new is more valuable because it fits in; but its fitting in is a test of its value.-T. S. Eliot

A man may praise and praise, but no one recollects but that which pleases.-George Gordon, Lord Byron

The great beauty of poetry is that it makes everything in every place interesting.-John Keats

Our faulty elder poets sacrificed the passion and passionate flow of poetry to the subtleties of intellect and to the stars of wit; the moderns to the glare and glitter of a perpetual, yet broken and heterogeneous imagery, or rather to an amphibious something, made up, half of image, and half of abstract meaning. The one sacrificed the heart to the head; the other both heart and head to point and drapery.-S. T. Coleridge

The purpose of rhythm, it has always seemed to me, is to prolong the moment of contemplation, the moment when we are both asleep and awake, which is the one moment of creation.-W. B. Yeats

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