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Beauty is the sole legitimate province of the poem.-Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is when emotion has found its thought and thought has found words--Robert Frost

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance--Carl Sandburg

I have nothing to say, I am saying it, and that is poetry--John Cage

You will find poetry nowhere unless you bring some of it with you--Joseph Joubert

Poetry is what in a poem makes you laugh, cry, prickle, be silent, makes your toe nails twinkle, makes you want to do this or that or nothing, makes you know that you are alone in the unknown world, that your bliss and suffering is forever shared and forever all your own. ~Dylan Thomas

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A Murder of Three Crow Brothers Poems: Alas! The End of Poem-a-Week



As I indicated last week, I have been walking a bunch over the last few weeks, mostly just me and Luna, and I "entertain" myself when walking alone by making up lyrics to whatever the three crow brothers happen to be doing. Yes! The three crow brothers are real! For two years now, I have noticed the same three crows around the fairgrounds and city park area. I assume they are the same three. Only Mother Crow need know the difference.


Anyhow, I have been walking a lot alone and making up lyrics to whatever the crow brothers are doing when I first see them each day. Last week, they had disappeared (In "real time," that is actually about two and half weeks ago.) Therefore, in the last blog, they were missing. I hadn't seen them in four or five days at that point. Then, one morning, they returned. Here is the ditty that I made up that day. ENJOY!


The Three Crow Brothers Return

 

I found the three crow brothers.

My spirit is renewed,

But their feathers are ruffled

As if there’s been a feud.

 

One is slinking in the sedge,

One’s up in livestock row,

One’s sittin’ in the rodeo seats

As if to watch a show.

 

And all of them are silent

And hardly stir a wing

And if I holler out to them,

My words don’t mean a thing.

 

I wonder what can make three crows

Get mad enough to fight,

For they have shared most every meal

Right down to the last bite.

 

I’ve watched them fight a big ol’ hawk

Because they had each other,

But they have also fled from jays

Much smaller than their brother.

 

I guess I should not worry.

Their fight’s not mine to know.

I’m sure each brother’s sorry,

‘Least as sorry as a crow.



Well, the next day, the three crow brothers were back up to their usual business. I guess that at least two of them had patched up their differences. Here's what we thought about that day.


Eating Crow

There’s them three crow brothers.

Two’re perchin’ on a knot.

The other’s peckin’ at some fur.

I can’t see what he’s got.

 

They’re watchin’ me suspicious

As if I had a gun

And I’m the type of feller

Who’d shoot a crow for fun.

 

Fact is I’ve never hunted crow

But I have eaten lots.

Now, you can fry it up it pans

Or boil it in pots,

 

But it is always bitter

And usually causes gas.

I think with all the crow I’ve et.

I’ll let these three crows pass.

 

The brothers, though, they follow me

As if I’ve more to tell

About this act of eatin’ crow.

Well, they can go to Hell!


For the third crow brother lyric this week, we have a rather upsetting crow brother poem. When I arrived at the fairgrounds for the morning walk, I quickly noticed a huge gathering of buzzards on something that was lying at the edge of the road on the other side of the rodeo arena. When Luna and I got over there, chasing all the birds off in the process, we saw that someone had shot a young doe. They had just shot it. They didn't cut any meat off the I could tell. Someone, I assume the shooter, had driven up next to it to look it over. I could tell this from the tire tracks in the wet mud. After Luna and I walked on the buzzards, crows, and hawks went back to tearing at the carcass. I guess someone had provided them with an ample holiday meal, but what a waste! Anyhow, here is the poem. ENJOY if you can, but also feel free to get ANGRY along with me.


Feed Him to the Crows

 

I see them three crow brothers,

Unless my vision warps,

With two hawks and four buzzards

A feastin’ on a corpse.

 

It is an odd assembly,

This carrion-lovin’ crew.

Hawks prefer to kill their food

Not like the brothers do.

 

They like to find their sustenance

Layin’ quietly at rest

While red tails fly their wrigglin’ meals

A squealin’ to their nest.

 

But some man killed this whitetail deer.

I could not tell you why.

It’s small, stippled, and hornless

To any seeing eye.

 

Yes, murder’s easy to a man

When his hands hold a gun,

And killing helpless animals

Seems like such sportin’ fun.

 

If I ever cross this wastrel,

Slayer of yearling does,

I’ll stake his dumb ass to her corpse

And feed him to the crows.


Finally, Yes! Sadly, we are at the end of the yearlong Poem-a-Week cycle. I actually have half or more than the 52 that would make up a year of weeks. It is now time for me to start revising the poems and putting them in a book. Please take the time to read back through the poems for the last year and help me come up with a name.


I'll tell you what. I will name the book whatever the first person says the name of the book should be as long as it will fit neatly on the cover. You read that? YOU GET TO NAME THE BOOK! BE THE FIRST TO EMAIL YOUR SUGGESTION, AND YOUR TITLE WILL BE THE TITLE! You don't get many offers like that. My email is mbt1966@yahoo.com


Since I am done with Poem-a-Week, I don't know what I will be blogging about next week. Any suggestions?

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I find that I cannot exist without Poetry--without eternal poetry--half the day will not do--the whole of it--I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan.-John Keats

We do not quite say that the new is more valuable because it fits in; but its fitting in is a test of its value.-T. S. Eliot

A man may praise and praise, but no one recollects but that which pleases.-George Gordon, Lord Byron

The great beauty of poetry is that it makes everything in every place interesting.-John Keats

Our faulty elder poets sacrificed the passion and passionate flow of poetry to the subtleties of intellect and to the stars of wit; the moderns to the glare and glitter of a perpetual, yet broken and heterogeneous imagery, or rather to an amphibious something, made up, half of image, and half of abstract meaning. The one sacrificed the heart to the head; the other both heart and head to point and drapery.-S. T. Coleridge

The purpose of rhythm, it has always seemed to me, is to prolong the moment of contemplation, the moment when we are both asleep and awake, which is the one moment of creation.-W. B. Yeats

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