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Beauty is the sole legitimate province of the poem.-Edgar Allan Poe

Poetry is when emotion has found its thought and thought has found words--Robert Frost

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance--Carl Sandburg

I have nothing to say, I am saying it, and that is poetry--John Cage

You will find poetry nowhere unless you bring some of it with you--Joseph Joubert

Poetry is what in a poem makes you laugh, cry, prickle, be silent, makes your toe nails twinkle, makes you want to do this or that or nothing, makes you know that you are alone in the unknown world, that your bliss and suffering is forever shared and forever all your own. ~Dylan Thomas

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A Blah, Blah Blog with a Very Scary Face


Anyway, I was walking my dog Luna out at the Fulton County fairgrounds the other day when I looked up in the sky, and this evil-looking dude was giving me the stare down. He kept it up long enough that I had time to get a picture of him. As he slowly moved off to the northwest, he continued to shake his oversized fist at me, but I wasn't scared. He is just a bunch of water vapor. He didn't even have any lightning or thunder though he looks in a foul mood.

So... first blog in a week. Here is where things are. I have 28 students in two summer classes and one independent study. That leaves me no real time to write. I am not much at writing in snatches, so I am not getting much done. I have a post apocalyptic story/song that I am working on tentatively called The Song of King Thoom. Let me get you a snippet of that.


The Song of King Thoom


I Ooman

I Thoom-King of Oomans


Foer King-time Thoom look sky

Oomans move bove ground thick boosh

Oomans klect seeds roots bries

Oomans look down n look round

Thoom look up sky

Thoom look for Hok


Hok bove sky

Hok no cloud

Hok boom sky

Down n down no sound

Hok hook Ooman

Fly Ooman way

Ooman Hok take see no more

No more same fa’iver


Foer King-time Thoom look sky

Yell Oomans “Hok! Hok!”

Oomans run bove ground thick boosh

Hide low Ert

Too slow-too slow

Hok hook many many

Ooman vife not good

Oomans not many not long


Long time foer Thoom

Oomans vive bove Ert

Oomans vive bove boosh

Oomans vive bove sky

Hok no treble Oomans foer time

Hok small Oomans big


Foer time foer Thoom

Oomans make death mong Oomans

Sky boom mush shroom

Ert splode dust oosh

Sky all cloud no sun no rin

No vive low sky

No vive bove Ert


I have a bit to finish of that song. I am on page 4 of probably six or seven, and I have not revised it carefully.

Anyway, I was reading some obscure Percy Shelley stuff the other day, and I decided to mimic his style and his subject for a minute, and the poem started off going great, but I lost the moment, and I struggle to get it back. This is the unrevised fragment. I do not have a title because it is not finished.


Look at me! Do not dare turn your eyes away!

This is the crumbling shell in which we live,

Prickling with stiff hairs of white and gray,

Rigid with vengeful pains that will not forgive.


I know this face’s features. I’ve seen these eyes

Full of joie de vie and mischievous twinkles,

Green and gold like springtide’s first disguise

Gazing back at me beneath lids free of wrinkles.


I recall these pliant lips, the easy smile,

That crinkled in each cheek a happy dimple,

A chin, unbearded, when razors were in style

And shaving the velvety skin was simple.


I remember how we paused at every mirror

In a time when what we saw we loved the most,

Then hated as the images got clearer,

And we found our figures lacking as a host.


Do you still love me? How am I to know?

Your eyes beg the same questions asked of mine?

The time we’ve wasted…we should let it go

And read this wordless silence as sign.


What else? Oh! I got an email from Emma Jones at Austin Macauley. She said that I can expect that Atheists and Empty Spaces will be coming out in July. I wrote back to her, and said, and I quote, "I am prepared to be excited." I sure hope these publishers have something great going on because it seems to have taken an inordinate amount of time to publish this book of poetry.


You know, with all that has been going on, maybe the guy in the sky was a reflection of me. No, I am not evil, but I suspect if you could watch me without me knowing, you would see a lot of angry faces that I make. I will not even bother you with why I am so angry, but trust me. It is righteous anger.


I just looked. I do not have a new picture of a flower, not even one new one of my beloved coneflowers. Hmm...

How about a golden oldie? This is last year's first bloom of the Echinacea.



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I find that I cannot exist without Poetry--without eternal poetry--half the day will not do--the whole of it--I began with a little, but habit has made me a Leviathan.-John Keats

We do not quite say that the new is more valuable because it fits in; but its fitting in is a test of its value.-T. S. Eliot

A man may praise and praise, but no one recollects but that which pleases.-George Gordon, Lord Byron

The great beauty of poetry is that it makes everything in every place interesting.-John Keats

Our faulty elder poets sacrificed the passion and passionate flow of poetry to the subtleties of intellect and to the stars of wit; the moderns to the glare and glitter of a perpetual, yet broken and heterogeneous imagery, or rather to an amphibious something, made up, half of image, and half of abstract meaning. The one sacrificed the heart to the head; the other both heart and head to point and drapery.-S. T. Coleridge

The purpose of rhythm, it has always seemed to me, is to prolong the moment of contemplation, the moment when we are both asleep and awake, which is the one moment of creation.-W. B. Yeats

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